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标题: ［求助］请同门帮我翻译下一小段英文 [打印本页]

作者: feng006 时间: 2008-10-3 20:50 标题: ［求助］请同门帮我翻译下一小段英文

Your thoughts are almost occupied when her care can let you be Uneasy whether sitting or standing.
why don't you far away form her? Your will be make you down and everything be known from now on.
You life couldn't like those days...
Concealing your care and don't paying attention to her though you knew you may leave your heart on her.
Don't you forgot it?
Your motto is Spirit of Nicholas Tse--Persevering...
You knew your can't make a happy life for her so you must Remembers these firmly  ...
You must ..
You cannot, therefore you cannot

英语好烂，好几年没碰过了  - -！
写的东西感觉怪怪的  有同门可以帮我改正下吗总觉得语法单词错太多了  谢谢啦～

作者: feng006 时间: 2008-10-3 20:50

补充下能把语法单词错误帮我修正下么

谢谢啦～

作者: 锋疯的我 时间: 2008-10-3 21:04

额``
一个我都看不懂``
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不过`我再努力的了!
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哈`

作者: 淡淡、牛奶味 时间: 2008-10-3 21:05

天天看英语

头晕哈。。。

作者: NIC_KO 时间: 2008-10-3 21:13

助动词动词还不原形

作者: べ锋╆魔╆繪 时间: 2008-10-3 21:15

我是中国人不学外国文

作者: 唯锋闪烁 时间: 2008-10-3 21:16

Your thoughts are almost occupied when her care can let you be Uneasy whether sitting or standing.
当她的关心让你变得不知道是站着还是坐着，你的想法已经几乎被她占据。
why don't you far away from her? Your will be make you down and everything be known from now on.
为什么你不远离她？从此以后你的意愿将会变得渺小，一切都会被知道。
You life couldn't like those days...
你的日子不能这样...
Concealing your care and don't paying attention to her though you knew you may leave your heart on her.
隐瞒你的心意，不再关注她，即使你知道你不能离开她。
Don't you forgot it?
不能忘了吗？
Your motto is Spirit of Nicholas Tse--Persevering...
你的座右铭是：霆锋精神－－坚毅...
You knew your can't make a happy life for her so you must Remembers these firmly ..
.你知道你不能给她一个幸福的生活，因此你要牢牢地记住...
You must ..
你必须...
You cannot, therefore you cannot
你不能，因此，你不能

作者: NIC_KO 时间: 2008-10-3 21:18

LS的很厉害呀！！

作者: 唯锋闪烁 时间: 2008-10-3 21:19

大部分是中国式英语～
没有特别优美地句型～
拼写有错误～
实在要改，就是别用那么多地 you she her 多用点从句比较好～

献丑了有错误请同门赐教～
我大学学翻译的，才刚刚开始

作者: 吻着道歉 时间: 2008-10-3 21:20

incredible translation!!!!!! IDOL

作者: 追锋小丫头 时间: 2008-10-3 21:23 标题: 回复 7楼唯锋闪烁的帖子

这句改一下
you knew you can't make her happy, so you must keep those in your mind.

还有我感觉最后一句应该这样那个therefore最好改为because
然后这一句就是：you can't because you just can't
you can"t, therefore you can't(你不能你就是不能)

作者: NIC_KO 时间: 2008-10-3 21:24

大学学英语的~厉害喔！

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